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First, there is a tense inconsistency in one sentence: didn't know (past tense) is used together with is (present tense). Both verbs should be in the same tense.
Next, in the sentence about the Gruffalo’s appearance, it is better to say “makes him look funny” instead of make him funny, because we are describing how he appears.
In the Mouse paragraph, remember that after “let” we do not use to.
So it should be: he doesn’t let them intimidate him (no to needed).
Also, “cheat on” is normally used when talking about relationships. In this context, a better verb would be “trick” or “deceive.”
In the Snake paragraph, there is a small subject–verb agreement mistake. Since agility is singular, the verb should be “makes” instead of make.
Everything else is great — your vocabulary, grammar, and use of adjectives are very good. Well done!
Thank you for submitting your homework. Let’s check what can be improved
First, there is a tense inconsistency in one sentence: didn't know (past tense) is used together with is (present tense). Both verbs should be in the same tense.
Next, in the sentence about the Gruffalo’s appearance, it is better to say “makes him look funny” instead of make him funny, because we are describing how he appears.
In the Mouse paragraph, remember that after “let” we do not use to.
So it should be: he doesn’t let them intimidate him (no to needed).
Also, “cheat on” is normally used when talking about relationships. In this context, a better verb would be “trick” or “deceive.”
In the Snake paragraph, there is a small subject–verb agreement mistake. Since agility is singular, the verb should be “makes” instead of make.
Everything else is great — your vocabulary, grammar, and use of adjectives are very good. Well done!