In the sentence “The animals are afraid of him but they don't know.”, i think there is a full stop that was not meant to be place there, is that correct?
Also, in the Snake paragraph, try to keep consistency when referring to the animal. You switch between it and she, so it is better to choose one and use it throughout the paragraph.
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In the sentence “The animals are afraid of him but they don't know.”, i think there is a full stop that was not meant to be place there, is that correct?
Also, in the Snake paragraph, try to keep consistency when referring to the animal. You switch between it and she, so it is better to choose one and use it throughout the paragraph.
Your work shows very advanced vocabulary and well-structured sentences.
Overall, very good work and strong use of adjectives and descriptions.